trying out haikus...
big, full golden moon
between two tall palm tree tops
inky purple sky
bare, slender branches
parakeets, thick as leaves
still, as though transfixed
these are just experiments... according to Vivek, you need to read the work of the old japanese masters first before you try to write haikus, and I've never read any... and now I'm fearing scathing remarks from vivek if he reads all these references on my blog!!
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